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« Thread Started on Jul 21, 2008, 7:15pm »

Name
Featherstorm

Clan
AzureClan

Rank
Deputy

Gender
She-cat

Age
20 moons

Eye Color

Her eye color is bright green with a hint of dark blue.

Pelt Color
Phantomstorm's pelt is tabby-like, but with spots along with the stripes. Phantomstorm's feet, chest, stomach, chest, chin, and the tip of the tail is pure white. On Phantomstorm's tail is a pattern of stripes and spots. Phantomstorm's face is a mixture of stripes and spots.

Build
Phantomstorm's build is excellent. Phantomstorm's upper body strength is well matched by Phantomstorm's lower body strength which she uses to hunt prey. But Phantomstorm is a little weak when it comes to fighting for long periods of time. But Spiritstorm's toughness will always see through.

Personality
Phantomstorm's personality is what you call "a little off." Phantomstorm's kind and caring heart is what makes her such a great friend. But Phantomstorm's temper can easily be tipped
off if she is greatly offended. Phantomstorm's courage in battle is what makes her a great warrior. And her humility is waht makes her the most thought-of person in the clan.

Mate/Crush

None

Kits

None.

Kin

Father;; Doesn't know
Mother;; Doesn't know
Siblings;; Doesn't know
Distant;; Ebonystar

History

Phantomstorm's history is quite sad. When she was a kit, she was abandoned by her parents in AzureClan territory. One of its patrols found her and brought her to the clan, where she was accepted. Everyday, she had to prove herself to the clan that she was capable enough to survive. Now a warrior, she is respected by all and has made good friends in the clan. But everyday, she still thinks of her parents and believes that she will meet up with them again. But for now, she will continue to serve her clan with her live and her heart.

Other

She loves to go out and sit in the sunlight and think about her life. She despises anyone who interrupts her.

Short Description
Phantomstorm is a she-cat with a tabby-like coat with spots on her pelt, face, and tail. She has white feet, a white stomach, a white chin, and a white tip of a tail. Her eyes are bright green with a hint of dark blue.

Codeword
8-)
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« Reply #1 on Jul 24, 2008, 8:12am »

I'm sorry, but the name you chose falls under Rule#2. Cats do not know what phantoms are, so that needs to be changed.
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« Reply #2 on Jul 24, 2008, 4:34pm »

Ok. I fixed it.
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« Reply #3 on Jul 27, 2008, 9:43am »

TT^TT
Once again, you'll have to change the name. The warriors would not be named after spirits, as that is in relation to StarClan. Sorreh. Again.
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« Reply #4 on Jul 27, 2008, 12:56pm »

Ok. Fixed it again.
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« Reply #5 on Aug 1, 2008, 10:22am »

Okay. The name is fine. Now, you need to add a bit.

Under build you need one more sentence.

Once you do that, I can accept her. =)
Sorry for all the trouble.
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« Reply #6 on Aug 6, 2008, 6:55pm »

Ok, added it.
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